Mr Fart - Adventure

Yes, the glasses and the haircut make him look very underaged to me... Like a looney toon character from a bugs bunny cartoon

Will the demo be also available for osx?

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AFRL , what is humblebudle ? You mean that I will pay like..40-50 euros to buy a game and then donate it to someone in the hope that he will give me a good feedback? That will cost me ...thousands right? Excuse me , but I am new (1st game) so can you explain it better for me pleeeeeasseee?

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haha I said $1 (one dollar US) which is less than €1 for 6 games. Humble Bundle is a distribution store (like steam) that often sell bundles of games or individual games at massively discounted prices. The money they make gets split 3 ways. They keep a part of each sale, donate some to a charity of your choice & the rest goes to the developers of the game(s) you bought. Google it.

Well he was intended to look like a younger version of a corny old man (like a young elmer fudd)
The demo will only be for PC

I will have it ready during the end of this week (I hope)

Thank you AFRL , I will surely look into it once I am done with the demo

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Yes, the glasses and the haircut make him look very underaged to me... Like a looney toon character from a bugs bunny cartoon

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I also thought the character looks really young. Kind of like a young teenage geek or something. I think it's the glasses, hair-style & because he is quite short. Maybe you could give him a porn-stache? (mustache)

OK , it will increase my demo release but it is better safe then sorry ^_^ , so I will try to make him look older by either adding a stache or a scar or something else (but stache should be the fastest)

Now?

I have to be honest... he now looks like a kid wearing a fake mustache.

I believe the main problem is how he looks overall as he doesn't look like a private investigator - at all. Most private investigators / detectives in cartoons look somewhat like this...

My recommendation would be to follow the trend, but put your own spin onto it. & make sure you give him a vice as all good detective always has some bad habit or other. Maybe he could constantly tug at his nuts, or smoke a pipe/cigar/cig like a chimney, or sneakily take drams from a whiskey flask or something every so often.

I can't change him entirely , that would take me months since I based the game artwork as well on that character. I will see what I can do to make him look older though ^_^

looks okay to me.. maybe when you explain it at the beginning of your game what he did in the past and what education he has, etc, everyone should understand that he is older than he looks...

At the beginning he explains that he just finished Private Investigator College and that this is his first case. Later he realizes that he was selected on purpose because he has no experience and he was bound to fail.
I am attaching the save menu so you can see some game-art and how he was imagined (add the mustache too)